Nosebleed & Painting

Well, so this is the first finished project we've had so far in Illustration class. I'm pretty happy with the concept and idea, as far as depicting Nosebleed Phobia i think the idea works as a whole. However i'm really not satisfied with the final product, the action and dynamics i had in the tight sketch didn't really translate when i put the paint on there... but yea, lesson learned.

And this is the painting i did in painting class at Sarasota Main Street. I'm pretty "meh" about it too.